between quartz & obsidian
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Keep waiting
Anticipating
So crazy in…
Sin?
Dying
Always crying
Am without
Doubt
Just be there
Play fair
And care
Keep trying
Still crying
Your time
Really mine?
Always
In a daze
Not a game
Still the same?
Then say
Some day
Stay
Keep feeling
Not stealing
Please don’t
I won’t
Just show
Don’t go
Missing
Kissing
Hold my hand
Understand
Me
Very nice. I like the rhythm. Maybe you can post a sound file of you reading this?
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wow. This is, pretty much, a mirror image to my previous relationship. The poem is well put together; I can relate to it.
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beautifully written! :)
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interesting.
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I really liked this one!
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I started writing it as a text message, it was only supposed to be one stanza but all these other thoughts leaked out of my head too and so we have the delightful lack of any interfering words! I don’t have any recording equipment, but I will try to fix somethng up!
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spectred & scriptured 
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